Comments for Skull.in http://skull.in The power of the crystal skulls Thu, 11 Mar 2010 16:51:04 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 Comment on i wrote this and im going to enter it in my schools lit mag what do u think? by Michael B http://skull.in/179-i-wrote-this-and-im-going-to-enter-it-in-my-schools-lit-mag-what-do-u-think/comment-page-1#comment-3429 Michael B Thu, 11 Mar 2010 16:51:04 +0000 http://skull.in/179-i-wrote-this-and-im-going-to-enter-it-in-my-schools-lit-mag-what-do-u-think#comment-3429 There are some areas where some re-writing would be good but overall I was wondering what was the point. OK - blackouts. You then stab the old woman. I've no idea why. Large hands - were they from the bald man? I assume you've been hospitalised (mental condition) in the last bit but that's not clear. overall it lacks structure and a sense of purpose and conclusion. There are some areas where some re-writing would be good but overall I was wondering what was the point. OK – blackouts. You then stab the old woman. I’ve no idea why. Large hands – were they from the bald man?

I assume you’ve been hospitalised (mental condition) in the last bit but that’s not clear.

overall it lacks structure and a sense of purpose and conclusion.

]]> Comment on i wrote this and im going to enter it in my schools lit mag what do u think? by Grendel http://skull.in/179-i-wrote-this-and-im-going-to-enter-it-in-my-schools-lit-mag-what-do-u-think/comment-page-1#comment-3428 Grendel Thu, 11 Mar 2010 16:20:02 +0000 http://skull.in/179-i-wrote-this-and-im-going-to-enter-it-in-my-schools-lit-mag-what-do-u-think#comment-3428 It really just makes no sense, sorry. It really just makes no sense, sorry.

]]> Comment on i wrote this and im going to enter it in my schools lit mag what do u think? by leesa http://skull.in/179-i-wrote-this-and-im-going-to-enter-it-in-my-schools-lit-mag-what-do-u-think/comment-page-1#comment-3427 leesa Thu, 11 Mar 2010 15:37:25 +0000 http://skull.in/179-i-wrote-this-and-im-going-to-enter-it-in-my-schools-lit-mag-what-do-u-think#comment-3427 Very good. I found myself getting pulled in, wanting to know more about the fortune teller and wondering what was going to happen next. Creative writing, when effect, pulls the reader into the story and your story does this well. Definitely you should submit it to the paper. Write on! Very good. I found myself getting pulled in, wanting to know more about the fortune teller and wondering what was going to happen next.
Creative writing, when effect, pulls the reader into the story and your story does this well. Definitely you should submit it to the paper.
Write on!

]]> Comment on Would you take the Nazis over Communists? by Uprooted Palestinians: The mystery of the Afghanistan war | Debt Finance Wisdom http://skull.in/178-would-you-take-the-nazis-over-communists/comment-page-1#comment-3424 Uprooted Palestinians: The mystery of the Afghanistan war | Debt Finance Wisdom Mon, 01 Mar 2010 23:34:43 +0000 http://skull.in/178-would-you-take-the-nazis-over-communists#comment-3424 [...] Would you take the Nazis over Communists? | Skull.in [...] [...] Would you take the Nazis over Communists? | Skull.in [...]

]]> Comment on Would you take the Nazis over Communists? by John N http://skull.in/178-would-you-take-the-nazis-over-communists/comment-page-1#comment-3421 John N Mon, 01 Mar 2010 18:05:20 +0000 http://skull.in/178-would-you-take-the-nazis-over-communists#comment-3421 Actually the are both the same system. Nazi stands for the National Socialistic German Worker's Party. The USSR is the Union of Soviet Socialistic Republics. In both systems it is the government that decides everything. That is why there were all of the book burnings in Nazi Germany. The State decided what you could and could not read. What you could and could not watch or listen to and so on. The same held for the Soviet Union. The Soviet Union never reached a state of communism. True communism can be seen working in the Catholic church. Just look at the monasteries and cloisters. "Each according to his needs. Each according to his abilities". So in that sense I would have to go with communism. The only problem is that communism works on a small scale. Why would anybody want to work twice as hard and get half as much as someone else, but then again I wouldn't like the government telling me everything I can and can not do. Actually the are both the same system. Nazi stands for the National Socialistic German Worker’s Party. The USSR is the Union of Soviet Socialistic Republics. In both systems it is the government that decides everything. That is why there were all of the book burnings in Nazi Germany. The State decided what you could and could not read. What you could and could not watch or listen to and so on. The same held for the Soviet Union. The Soviet Union never reached a state of communism. True communism can be seen working in the Catholic church. Just look at the monasteries and cloisters. “Each according to his needs. Each according to his abilities”. So in that sense I would have to go with communism. The only problem is that communism works on a small scale. Why would anybody want to work twice as hard and get half as much as someone else, but then again I wouldn’t like the government telling me everything I can and can not do.

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